...wow. Neither of the quotes in here (I assume you refer to the 'silicon mistress' and 'kiss me now' lines) are at all subtle in my book; in fact they are embarrassingly direct and pointed statements. Although the second is at least cute while the first smacks of jealousy and discomfort in a way that would mortify me to display in front of friends. I was noting that something that IS subtle (to others) but direct (to you, because it's agreed on in advance) might be more appropriate. And I admit, the first one seems humorous - but not gentle - to me. The second one is...I dunno. Demanding, not humorous, medium-gentle. Different approaches, I guess! It's Colleen's comfort and yours that matter here, really, I just - didn't pick those up as "coded" cues (which is what I was speaking about because they're very blatant/open.
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Date: 2008-10-31 09:11 pm (UTC)