*nod* I'll go with your one-word change, then. I may be the songwriter, but you're the expert on how it feels to be you.
...And I also like that image of your day as a journey. (and change "trip" to "journey", which swings better as well as hitting both meanings of the line more squarely)
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Date: 2008-08-20 05:16 pm (UTC)...And I also like that image of your day as a journey.
(and change "trip" to "journey", which swings better as well as hitting both meanings of the line more squarely)