Another verse for QV

[mdlbear]

Took a nice long walk this morning, during which this requested verse finally started to come together. Can't say I'm happy with it yet, but I have four more weeks until my concert at ConChord...

Prince Charming sweeps you off your feet
And boldly carries you away;
Your rescuer has come at last---
But that's not what the bruises say.
You try to be the perfect wife,
But fail no matter what you do.
You hope that he won't see you cry.
There must be something wrong with you.
    A friend comes by while he's away
    You pack a bag and quickly leave
    Those must be tears of joy I see:
    There's nothing left behind to grieve.

Still needs some thought, particularly in line 6.